Thursday, March 13, 2014

Poetry

We have been working on all kinds of poetry in the last two weeks.  Some of the poems we have been reading rhyme, some don't.  Here are a couple of the kids' own poems that they worked on this week.  I think they are doing a pretty good job.

Savannah's Onomatopoeia poem:

Zap a Boom gun over
The nite. Achoo! A
Sneezey persone over
the day. What noise!
Vroom. My car is here
Smash! Not again!


Asher's Onomatopoeia poem:

Boom! and Bam!
And a Crash and Smash!
Lot of loud stuff.
And 2 more
Zap and Pop!



The kids also wrote a couple of St. Patrick's Day Poems where they were supposed to rhyme and include two similes.  This was a tough one.

Asher's Poem:
 
Get a Leaf
Get it and paint it green for St. Patrick's Day
A green man as a green door?
A green frog like a flower,
It is good!
I play with green balls for 7 bucks
Ball it is small.


Savannah's Poem:

Phile (Phil)
The St. Patrick's Day man
Had a brother named Nan

Nan had a jolly sole
Yesterday he saw a hole.
With Green Leaves as big as sharks!

Nan's Borther was like a bear
But only used a gun to hunt.

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