We have been working on all kinds of poetry in the last two weeks. Some of the poems we have been reading rhyme, some don't. Here are a couple of the kids' own poems that they worked on this week. I think they are doing a pretty good job.
Savannah's Onomatopoeia poem:
Zap a Boom gun over
The nite. Achoo! A
Sneezey persone over
the day. What noise!
Vroom. My car is here
Smash! Not again!
Asher's Onomatopoeia poem:
Boom! and Bam!
And a Crash and Smash!
Lot of loud stuff.
And 2 more
Zap and Pop!
The kids also wrote a couple of St. Patrick's Day Poems where they were supposed to rhyme and include two similes. This was a tough one.
Asher's Poem:
Get a Leaf
Get it and paint it green for St. Patrick's Day
A green man as a green door?
A green frog like a flower,
It is good!
I play with green balls for 7 bucks
Ball it is small.
Savannah's Poem:
Phile (Phil)
The St. Patrick's Day man
Had a brother named Nan
Nan had a jolly sole
Yesterday he saw a hole.
With Green Leaves as big as sharks!
Nan's Borther was like a bear
But only used a gun to hunt.
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